Finding the right level of hedging in your language
Introduction section
Be sure you introduction gives brief reference to your factors and their levels enough for me to understand your hypotheses. Hypotheses should cover all levels of your factors.
Method section
Be sure to mention random assignment.
Include images or vingettes, if relevant.
Be specific about your response variable questions.
Most everyone needed more description in their their method section. A person brand new to your study should be able to replicate it.
Results and Statistical writing
Integrating statistical information into your text, (two to three decimal places only, p < .001 please). Your statistical information should be used to tell a coherent, accurate, story/description of your results. Move away from listing results.
Do not include information about data cleaning. Do not tell me anything about your downloading the data.
Your conclusion should actually discuss your results, especially if they are counter to your hypotheses. No, your results are not “obvious.”